You know what I just realized? It's not our fault that this happened to us. When I broke up with you, society had told me that men must be strong and definitive. When you stopped talking to me, a figure of authority had told you to. Since we didn't know any better, we followed through. We were upset, lost, and unable to think. Now that I've had all these months to think, I realize that it was wrong to force us apart. I can only hope and pray that you'll soon realize that, too.
What's keeping me going is a part of me holding on to a part of you, these parts that long to be together. These parts are faultless. They are our love.
Wow, you've really put a lot of effort into these. They're really beautiful in a poetic way, I hope she someday reads them.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad that you find beauty in my words. Thank you for your hope; I'll keep hoping, too. For now, I'll be happy that people are reading what I have to say, and happier that they enjoy it.
DeleteBy the way, congratulations on being the first comment on this blog. I was wondering how long it'd take for someone to comment.